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Essay climate change and life expectancy

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Climate change and global warming is a serious threat the world is facing, which is reducing the average life expectancy. What are some causes of this? How can governments and healthcare sectors solve this problem?

 

Despite the well-known impact of climate change on the world, there is a global concern about its effects on human health and life expectancy. This essay aims to explore the main causes of the decrease in life expectancy due to global warming and possible solutions to this problem.

As temperatures rise, droughts, floods, storms, and heatwaves become more frequent, and these climate events can cause populations around the world to suffer from diseases transmitted by vectors such as malaria, which is common in tropical countries. Unfortunately, many people living in these areas are below the poverty line and lack access to healthcare resources. Therefore, the number of deaths due to inequality of access will increase exponentially in the future.

Another possible cause of decreased life expectancy is the lack of food security. A balanced diet is crucial for maintaining a healthy body, but if temperatures continue to increase, many crops will disappear, and the variety of vegetables and fruits that enhance our health will be limited or unavailable to us. This lack of nutrient diversity can threaten people's survival and lead to health issues such as diabetes and cancer.

Governments can contribute to decreasing the burden of diseases caused by natural disasters and vector-transmitted diseases related to climate change by implementing policies that reduce the overproduction of minerals and the overexploitation of non-renewable resources such as oil. By doing so, greenhouse gas emissions can be reduced, and the healthcare system can allocate more resources to treating critical diseases.

Global organizations are making efforts to highlight the importance of social security in terms of food availability and are supporting financially the reduction of the impact of climate change on farmers. Landless farmers who almost entirely depend on the agricultural sector in regions where rainfall is scarce are at risk of food insecurity. It is desirable that organizations invest efforts and funds to prevent the lack of food security and illnesses related to malnutrition or a diet based on a higher content of calories.

In conclusion, global warming is affecting human health by transmitting diseases and decreasing the availability of food, putting the number of years lived by people at risk. However, governments and healthcare decision-makers can significantly decrease mortality rates by implementing policies that reduce disease transmission and increase funds to support farmers.

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Essay: More and more people mainly get their news on social media. In your opinion, what could explain such a phenomenon?

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It is obvious that social medias have revolutionized our way of life and change our behaviour. One of the main reasons of their success is their facility of use and their practicality and I think that's why lots of  people get their news on social media and no more on newspaper or TV.

First, social media allows you to get information everywhere and everytime for free.  You have no more to go out to buy the newspapers to obtain the news. This accessibility is also allowed by the TV but you have more different sources and point of views on social media than on TV. Moreover, social medias are the only platform that allows people to share their opinions on a subject online and with other people. Indeed, people tends to be more and more suspicious to traditional supports of information that generally share the same views and belongs to the same companies and people that adopt political correctness. I think that social media answer to this need of people who want to make their own opinion and don't want to follow the views broadcast by the mainstream media.
In addition, social networks have algorithms that know the subject that interested you and present them to you. You haven't to search the news that are important for you because the task is already doing by the social media.  You earn lot of time by getting only the information that matters to you.
Then you can easily go back to the information that interested you and the news don't take place in your home contrary to a newspaper.
In a nutshell, more people get their news on social media because it's free, easy to access, you can have a wide range of sources and point of views and you can react to the news.

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Essay: Some people prefer to work for companies that are structured and systematic. Others prefer to work for companies that are creative and more freeform. Which do you prefer and why?

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Personnally, I prefer to work in a company which has clear and defined rules than a company that choose more flexible rules and let their employees to manage themselves.First, I know that I am a person who is discipline and like rigor that's why I prefer to work in the first type of company. I think that I will be more efficient if there are rules. I also find that you know where you go in a company which is structured and well-organized. All the employees are also treated on the same basis because the rules are the same for all.Moreover, I think that rules help to work in groups. When you work in a company which gives no precise rules and fosters creativity, it is more difficult to lead a project and to be agree with your colleagues because there is no precise method to which you can refer.Then, I don't like people who are too original and want to impose their views to the others because they are convinced that they have the best idea. You more likely to find this kind of unrealistic person in a company which encourages freeforms of management and work.It can be paradoxical but I also think that a company which is well structured by rules protect the liberty of its employees. Indeed, I think that companies that adopt freeforms of hierarchy and wants to imply the employees in the organization of the company try first of all to make economies by recruiting less people because employees do that by themselves. It can stimulates the employees at the beginning but I think that it makes more work to do and create pressure in the long-term. In a nutshell, I think that I couldn't work in a company without hierarchy an rules.

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Essay news

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Can yo give me corrections in this essay? thanks in advance.

 

it is considered that news is extremely important to be informed about what is happening throughout the world. I considered having a lot of influence on people's lives due to maintaining them informed even if they are in different places in the world. This essay will discuss first the importance of news for people, secondly, discuss the reasons why they are dedicated to bad news, and lastly, a final idea if the news has to be more dedicated to positive ones.

Firstly, people rely on the news because it gathers information about what is happening on a daily basis in the city or place where they are currently living. the decisions passed on by broadcaster has an impact on the decision people make, whether is voting for a politician or being informed about the trends in the economy. For instance, following the stock´s market performance is reported in the news, providing valuable insights for investors.

Normally, the news is focused on deploying information from real contexts even if they're bad ones. The things that are happening every day used to be about natural catastrophes, killings, and kidnappings that are affecting many people around the world. There has been a marked increase in the bad news being reported in news channels and online channels using platforms such as Instagram and Facebook. As humans we got trapped in a world of negative feelings and news of this kind tends to have a longer effect on us. As a consequence, media houses tend to report more on this topic in order to increase their revenues.

Another point if the news matter to inform people in a positive way people will be less susceptible to mental health issues. However, it is impossible to eliminate all bad news, it is natural to present the current problems people are facing every day. if the broadcaster softened bad news a  bit, people would be reckoned to watch them more usual.  Hearing more about positive information could boost the energy of people to think in an optimistic way. As a consequence, people could allocate time to spending time watching television without being worried or stressed. After a long journey of working the least people want to hear is about bad news.  As a result, it is more enriching for them to enjoy the experience of an entrepreneur achieving success by doing a new project.

In conclusion, it is highly important for individuals to be informed about what is happening in the world. Whether is bad news or positive ones, it is important for broadcasters to think in a variety of ways to transmit information in a positive way.

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It is often considered  that change is more beneficial  to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think  the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?

 

 It is widely believed that making adjustments in life is significantly more beneficial than reimining in the same state. In my personal opinion, taking risks an trying new things can be even more rewarding.

 

By creating new experiences in life, one can awaken their sense of exploration and discover new ways of doing things.Trying something in a different way can lead your perspectives to a sudden change in perspectives. I can attest to this from my own experience of living abroad where  I not only learned about other language by getting out of my comfort zone but also tried new recipes of Philipine  and Indian cousine. This was worth it  and  It could be applied to one´s  lifestyle in terms of healthy routines such a diet that improves the overall performance of one. Although it maybe difficult to adjust at the begining, making small changes can significantly improve one´s well being and lead to a stronger and healthier body.



 

However, there are also disadvantages when trying something new without proper preparation.  It is essential to plan ahead and organize oneself  by creating and itinerary and routine before attempting something unusual in life. Merely having the desire to change  is not enough  to be  successful in a project. Therefore, researching new opportunities  and knowing the requirements is crucial.  For instance, if one plans to study abroad, fulfilling visa and  language requirement and saving some money are essential steps. Failure to meet these requirements can result in a nightmare rather than a dream come true. Thus, while taking risks and trying new things can be beneficial , it is important to be realistic about one’s limitations.

 

To sum up, despite the potential drawbacks, I believe that  there are significant benefits to changing behaviors in life. by taking calculated risks and doing adjustments , one can improve their quality of life and make it easier to navigate.

 

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Essay ielts

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There are different perspectives about grading students in subjects related to arts such as music, drawing, and acting, being more likely for students to get good development in their academic performance. I personally think that it is important to give some flexibility when it comes to grading students in the school, in that way, they can develop better their interests and feel more inspired. I agree that it is extremely important to not grade students with notes in classes that are more practical.

To begin with, feeling pressured for getting a grade can affect the learning process. Moreover, students will be overwhelmed trying to accomplish grades and also fulfilling their assignments. Although, in some cases getting a grade motivates students to do better most of the time it becomes a big factor in stressful situations and creates barriers in the process learning of new abilities. A student who wants to get inspiration normally needs time in the creative process, and if there is pressure to submit and present a test the purpose of studying only to get the grade probably will stop their inspiration. Without grades, students will enjoy thorough practical activities in a class by spending more time creating and less time thinking in a paper evaluation.

Another point, students can allocate more time to leisure activities that bring inspiration. it is known that arts subject requires that students have more free time to practice in the classroom and less in learning abstract concepts in most cases. by being flexible with the assignments teacher will allow that student to do more practical exercises. Even though, the teacher is required to give an evaluation to the institution they work, being more creative in the way they teach and get the grades could make a difference in how the students perform. for instance, a teacher in a painting class can create an activity that involves creativity in the same class and evaluates based on what is observed at class time. as a consequence, this kind of activity will boost the creativity of students and also the teacher could evaluate how students are acquiring new practical concepts.

In summary, it is important in subjects related to arts to enhance creativity by spending less time rushing to study for an exam and instead gaining more practical experience in the classroom which will allow not only students to develop their imagination but also teachers to be creative now pedagogical tools based on activities prepared during the class.

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Story part 4

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He doesn’t moved from couch. He waited two minutes and the lights turn on again. Until that moment, He didn’t look scared, well I take that back, just a bit. Finally He got up from couch, went to kitchen and drink a glass of water, although fanned the glass to sink. He was so frustrated. He went to switch, turn off the lights and run after there to room, It was back from cottage, where He slept until tomorrow morning.

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The hall was nearly empty. The night is coming and little light that came through the windows just allowed to see a table. Eliot felling the wall turned on the lights then he could see the table clearly and one couch, it pointed to the fireplace. He kept waking, he left his thing on the table without paying attention and went to the couch. Finally he dropped on the couch. After a while the lights turn off, but Eliot doesn’t do anything. Looks like that he expected it.

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A blessing in disguise?

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I used to lament the fact that French people overall are really bad at foreign languages, English in particular, especially in comparison with some of our neighbors e.g. Germans and Dutch. I mentioned it in one of my previous posts and shared the following article.

Les Français ont un mauvais niveau en langue : pourquoi ? | Assimil

It turns out that it could actually be a blessing in disguise! If you’ve read my profile or some of my writing, you already know there are a lot of things I appreciate about the U.S. That said, I also think there are instances in which we should most definitely not follow America's lead; I'm thinking about race relations for instance.

Maybe you’ve heard the saying: “When America sneezes, the world catches a cold”. I remember when I was much younger, when a trend started in the U.S, it usually took years for it to become popular in France. For instance, when American rappers started wearing their pants below the waist or with one leg rolled up, people here would make fun of you if you did that. A few years later, it had caught on.

Things seem to be going much faster nowadays, maybe in part because of internet. For instance, the whole world demonstrated over George Floyd and BLM has become a global phenomenon. 

However, France seems less receptive than the U.K for instance to what has become known as woke culture and this has already been widely commented.
 

Macron, France Reject American 'Woke' Culture That's 'Racializing' Their Country (newsweek.com)

The French are absolutely right to say 'no thanks' to US woke-ism (nypost.com)

I saw a debate on this issue on French TV and one of the participants suggested that one of the reasons France is more impermeable to all these ideas that have swept across the Anglo-Saxon world is that, by and large, French people don’t understand English. Although no evidence was presented to back up that statement, I have to admit it made sense to me.

 

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